Cross Breeds - Hi, I'm from Spain. Can you help me,please? Can you correct the grammar of this writting, please?

Hi, I'm from Spain. Can you help me,please? Can you correct the grammar of this writting, please?

Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the snowy mountains and the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia about half past three and from there we took the bus. In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain and the others sculpture from the Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. From Bolonia we went to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of Florencia that it had a wonderful stained glass windows and their ceiling and domes were covered by painting. In addition we saw the Fontana of Neptune and others more Renaissance sculpture. And we saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous and great monument. In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia standed out for its high and it large Cathedral. Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical horse race the medieval. One in 2 July in honour to the Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”), And another race in 16 August in honour to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio. The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny. We also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place that I loved it. From there we travel to Rome and we visit the Fontana di Trevi. The next day we went to Pompeya and we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio and the grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of Vesubio. The street were irregular and it wasn´t easy to walk by them We returned to Rome and we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna and there we started to sing the “Macarena” and another songs with the English tourists It was amazing and extremely funny. What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. What’s more we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels. In the afternoon we visit the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa and we took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. In the end we took the plane to come back home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it. ******************************************************************************* If you have more ideas or you think that I have to change something, please tell me I'll be grateful to hear it. P.D: "Fresh" is a kind of picture of art but I don't know its name in english. Thanks for all.

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Last week I VISITED Italy. During the flight THERE we SAW snowy mountains and green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia AT about half past three and there we took the bus TO THE CITY. In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain and the others sculptureS from the Renaissance WHICH WERE in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint PetER. From Bolonia we went to FlorencE where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of FlorencE that had wonderful stained glass windows and ceiling and domes covered by painting. In addition we saw the Fountain of Neptune and other more Renaissance sculptures. FURTHERMORE we saw the famous David of MICHAELANGELO. IT WAS enormous and A great monument. In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia stOOD out BECAUSE OF its hEIGHT and ITS large Cathedral. Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where the MEDIEVAL HORSE RACE IS HELD EVERY YEAR - one on 2nd July in honour of the Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”), and another race on 16th August in honour OF the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio. [?? Not sure what you are saying here] The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days WHEN it was raining, but also there were three days WHEN it was sunny. We also [pass through??] the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place that I fell in love with. From there we travelled to Rome and we visit the Fontana di Trevi [English would say Trevi Fountain]. The next day we went to Pompeya and saw the famous volcano, Vesubio [or Vesuvius] and the town buried by the ashes. There were petrified bodies COVERED WITH the ashes of Vesubio. The street were irregular and it wasn´t easy to walk ON them We returned to Rome and we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna. WHILE WE WERE there, we sAng the “Macarena” and other songs with SOME English tourists. It was amazing and extremely funny. What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. We also visitED the Capilla Sixtina [Sistine Chapel], the Vaticano museum with its spiral staircase and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. FURTHERMORE we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were lots of statues of angels. In the afternoon we visit the Partenon [Parthenon in English]. The next day WE WERE in Pisa and we took the USUAL pictures with the LEANING tower. In the end we took the plane to come back home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day. It WAS worth it. (I have changed some of the names to their English spelling, but not all. You may want to change them all or keep their Italian/Spanish forms. But be consistent, i.e., have them all in English or all in Italian/Spanish. Don't mix. The upper cases are just to show you what were changed.) Muy bien.
Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the snowy mountains and the green landscapes. We arrived at the airport of Bolonia about half past three and from there we took the bus. In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain and the others sculpture from the Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. From Bolonia we went on to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of Florencia. It had wonderful stained glass windows and their ceiling and domes were covered by paintings. In addition we saw the Fontana of Neptune and Renaissance sculpture, and more. Then we saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, it was an enormous and great monument. In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia standed out for its high and its large Cathedral. Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical horse race the medieval. One in 2 July in honour to the Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”), And another race in 16 August in honour to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). We saw the fountain Gaia, which is made out of white marble and the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio. The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that it was raining but there were also three days that it was sunny. We stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and green landscapes. It was the place that I loved. From there we traveled to Rome and we visited the Fontana di Trevi. The next day we went to Pompeya and we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio and the grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of Vesubio. The street were irregular and it wasn´t easy to walk on. We returned to Rome and we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna and there we started to sing the “Macarena” and other songs with the English tourists It was amazing and extremely funny. What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. What’s more we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels. In the afternoon we visit the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa and we took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. In the end we took the plane to come back home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it.
My corrections will be IN CAPS with ** Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the snowy mountains and the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia about half past three and from there we took the bus. In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain and the others sculpture from the Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. From Bolonia we went to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of Florencia *AND* it had a wonderful stained glass windows and their ceiling and domes were covered by *MANY* painting*S*. In addition*,* we saw the Fontana of Neptune and *OTHER FOUNTAINS* *AND THE* Renaissance sculpture. *ALSO* we saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous and great monument. In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia standed out for its high and it*'S* large Cathedral. Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical horse race the medieval. One *ON JULY 2ND* in *HONOR* to the Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”), And another race *ON AUGUST 16* in *HONOR* to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio. The weather in Italy was *PRETTY NICE*. However, there were three days that it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny. We also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place that I loved *(TAKE OUT IT)*. From there we travel*ED* to Rome and we visit*ED* the Fontana di Trevi. The next day we went to Pompeya and we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio and the grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of Vesubio. The street were irregular and it wasn´t easy to walk *ON* We returned to Rome and we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna and there we started to sing the “Macarena” and another songs with the English tourists It was amazing and extremely funny. *(TAKE OUT WHAT'S MORE)*The next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. *(TAKE OUT WHAT'S MORE)* *THEN,*we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels. In the afternoon we visit*ED* the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa and we took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. In the end we took the plane to come back home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it *WAS* worth it,
Last week I was in Italy. During the flight I could see the snowy mountains and the green landscapes. I arrived at the Bolonia airport about three thrity and from there I took the bus. In Bolonia I saw the Neptune fountain and the other sculptures from the Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. From Bolonia I went to Florencia where I visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of Florencia that it had a wonderful stained glass windows and their ceiling and domes were covered by painting. In addition, I saw the Fontana of Neptune and other more Renaissance sculptures. And I saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous and great monument. In Siena, I went up to the highest point of the town and from there I took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia stood out for its high and large cathedral. Then I visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the medival horse race. Once on 2 July in honor to the Virgin of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”), And another race in 16 August in honor to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). I saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio. The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny. I also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place that I loved. From there I traveled to Rome and visited the Fontana di Trevi. The next day I went to Pompeya and I saw the famous volcano, Vesubio and the grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of Vesubio. The street were irregular and it wasn´t easy to walk in them. I returned to Rome and I stayed at the Piazza di Espagna and there I started to sing the “Macarena” and another songs with the English tourists It was amazing and extremely funny. What’s more the next day I visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. I also visited the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. What’s more is I saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels. In the afternoon I visit the Partenon. The next day I stood in Pisa and I took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. On the last day, I took an airplane home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it. **************************************...
Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the snowy mountains and the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia about half past three and from there we took the bus. In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain and the other(s) sculptures* from the Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. From Bolonia we went to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of Florencia, (that) it had a wonderful stained glass window(s) and the(ir) ceiling and domes were covered (by)with* paintings*. In addition we saw the Fontana of Neptune and other(s more) Renaissance sculpture. And we saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous and great monument. In Siena(,).* We went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia (standed) stood* out (for) with* its high and (it) large Cathedral. Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical medieval* horse race (the medieval). (One in) on* 2 July in honour to the Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”), And another race in 16 August in honour to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and the face of Duomo with (fresh) a fresco* of Pinturicchio. The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny. We also stood (at) in* the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place that I loved (it)most*. From there we (travel)travelled* to Rome and we (visit)visited* the Fontana di Trevi. The next day we went to Pompeya and we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio and the grave town (by) in* the ashes. There were petrified bodies (by)in* the ashes of Vesubio. The streets were (irregular) uneven* and it wasn´t easy to walk (by) in* them.* We returned to Rome and we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna and there we started to sing the “Macarena” and another song(s) with the English tourists.* It was amazing and extremely funny. What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. (What’s more) Added to that* we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels. In the afternoon we (visit)visited* the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa and we took the typical pictures with the (tilt)tilted* tower. (In the end) Finally we took the plane to come back home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day, it’s worth it. **************************************... Enhorabuena, que bueno! Omit the words and letters (in brackets). Include the words or letters with a * I enjoyed reading about your holiday.
It is very good. I put in some minor corrections. Last week I was in Italy. During the flight, we could see the snowy mountains and the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport in Bolonia about half past three and from there we took the bus. In Bolonia, we saw the Neptune fountain and the other sculptures from the Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. From Bolonia we went to Florencia, where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo Cathedral of Florencia. It had wonderful stained glass windows and their ceiling and domes were covered by paintings. In addition, we saw the Fontana of Neptune and other Renaissance sculpture. We also saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous and great monument. In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia stood out because of its high, large cathedral. Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate on July 2 in honor of the Virgin of Provenzano (“Palo Provenzano”) There was a medievil horse race, another race on August 16th in honor to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). . We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio. The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that it was raining but ,also there were three days that it was sunny. We also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place that I loved . From there we traveled to Rome and we visited the Fontana di Trevi. The next day we went to Pompeya and we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio and the grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of Vesubio. The street were irregular and it wasn´t easy to walk by them. We returned to Rome and we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna and there we started to sing the “Macarena” and another songs with the English tourists It was amazing and extremely funny. What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro. We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel. What’s more we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels. In the afternoon we visited the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa and we took the typical pictures with the tilted tower. In the end we took the plane to come back home. In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it. Also, many of the sights you list have different names in English For instance Bologna not Bolonia. Florence instead of Florencia.The Virgins Ascent not Virgin Assunta There are too many for me to correct. Try typing them into google for English translations.