Cross Breeds

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Clap Cats Fearlessly Wit~FORCE~Digit~REMORSE~Have Yo ***** Screamin Fo"More"Get U Shanked By ~MAN-WHORES~I Start~WAR~I Can End Battles Wit Skin N Bonez Scattered On~THE-FLOOR!~Liquid ~GUSH-N-POUR~Beams Locked To Yo~THROAT~Hear My~GLOCK-ROAR~Incision Ya~NECK~I Blast Wit The Right Aim~PRECISION-TECHS!~U Aint Harsh~RETARD~I'll Destroy Ya Mark Like I~MURK-HARD!~Rip Torso From Spleen Leave Ya Wit A~DEATH-CARD!~Rip Each Body~PART~Away Like Crab Legs From~NEW-HEART!!~C.S.K~DISCARD... Aint No~VET~Take Ya Crew Like~VIETNAM-IN-SETS~Take Your Life Life Your Population~TSUNAMI'S-SWEPT!!~C... Ya~NECK~Blast My~TECHS~Cut Ya *** Up In"Sections"Like A~DECK!!~Trademark Destroyed Hacked In N~WRECKED!~ when i say youll get clapped u think [OF AN APPLAUSE] u aint real i can c threw u like [SCREEN DOORS]~ill end text battles like a home [MOVIE PRESSING PAUSE] dis dude aint real his faker than [SANTA CLAUSE]~this is a fact your[PASS WACK] all your drop is **** kinda like an [*** CRACK]~ 2 years im 13 you shud get on www.letsbeef.com www.thelyricalleauge.com it really helps skills iight man ~one~ AND ITS FUN hhaha

Public Comments

1. I really like it...I think that there are good multies, and this seems to be a good battle rap...however, to be a real rapper you have to have more than just battles..still I think this ish is illl...how long you been ryming?
2. For a battle that was dope, a lil repetitive for a regular joint(neck,deck,wrecked) but dope none the less. Kinda reminds me of some BCC/Gravediggaz ish real graphic like,at least the way I read it in my head. Stay wit it u nice.
3. i thought i told you to sleep ay yo check it i'ma put this little b*tch to bed... this little pu$sy keeps workin' my nerves kick the back of yo head in while you bittin' the curve who you fooling wit that killa sh*t no one believes you the shoe doesn't fit dead is how i'll leave you your letsbeef account is overdue go play somewhere else you the king... not true! i can whop your a$s with 10 bars leave you with bloody scars piss on you while i spark this cigar you preteen f a g g o t fu<kin' die b*tch yeah i'm real mean ya maggot i am hip hop in its truest form i don't make it rain i make a fu<kin' storm BLACKHEART!
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